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Auto E-mails for Blueline Milestone Customer Communications
APPROVED
OPTION 1:
Subject: You’ve been pre-approved!
Hi [NAME],
Great news: you’ve been pre-approved for a home loan! You’re now well on your way to completing your journey to homeownership!
The next step is to connect with a real estate agent and start looking for a home that suits your needs. We have one standing by for you – just reach out to your Loan Officer for more information, and they’ll make the connection.
If you have any questions about your pre-approval, or if there’s anything I can help you with in the future, please let me know!
Sincerely,
[NAME]
OPTION 2:
Subject: Great news about your loan!
Hi [NAME],
I’m happy to tell you that you have been pre-approved for a home loan – congratulations!
We can recommend a great real estate agent to work with on the next part of your journey toward homeownership. Just let us know, and we’ll make the connection.
In the meantime, if you have any questions about your pre-approval, please reach out to your Loan Officer.
Once again, congratulations!
Sincerely,
[NAME]
OPTION 3:
Subject: News about your pre-approval…
Hi [NAME],
Guess what? You’ve been pre-approved for a home loan! Congratulations!
The next step is to connect with a real estate agent who can help you find your dream home. If you don’t have one, we have a great recommendation. And if you have one you like working with, you’re free to move forward on your house hunt!
In the meantime, please reach out to your Loan Officer if you have any questions about your pre-approval. Good luck on your home search!
Best,
[NAME]
FUNDED
OPTION 1:
Subject: Congratulations!
Hi [NAME],
I have great news for you – your loan has now been funded! You’re well on your path to completing your journey to homeownership!
It has been wonderful to do business with you, and I’m pleased that you chose to work with Carrington for your home loan needs. If there’s anything I can help you with in the future, please let me know!
Sincerely,
[NAME]
OPTION 2:
Subject: Great news about your loan!
Hi [NAME],
I’m happy to tell you that your loan has been funded – congratulations!
I’m pleased to have been a part of your journey toward homeownership, and hope you have enjoyed working with us here at Carrington. Please do let us know if there’s anything we can ever help you with in the future.
Once again, congratulations!
Sincerely,
[NAME]
OPTION 3:
Subject: News about your loan
Hi [NAME],
Guess what? Your loan has been funded! Congratulations!
All of us at Carrington are happy you chose us to help you with your home loan needs – it has been a pleasure doing business with you. Please reach out if you need anything from us in the future!
Best,
[NAME]